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The glimmer on the blade…
So pretty.
So bright!

Don’t do this!
You have so much
To live for!

How easy ‘twould be
To give up the fight…

We’ve been through this!
We’ve been here before!

To feel the blade’s cold, passionless kiss…

You want to die?
Tell me now!

…The pain before eternal bliss….

Will you desert us?
We need you!
How?!

How can you lie and pretend you care?!

Look at these tears!
Do they look fake?!

You’ve never seen it!
You’ve never been there!

I’m with you every God-damned night
When your tears keep you awake!

So you claim…

Look at me fool!
You have eyes for a reason!

Every time
It’s always the same!

This is naught!
It’s just a short season!

Someone gives me the love I need…

You choose to be blind!
You don’t want to see…

And they end up cutting me to watch me bleed!

…That looking for love,
You should just look to me…

Then someone new looks
And sees my pain

Why don’t you realize?
Why don’t you care?!

When you look at me
What do you see?

But you’re too wrapped up
In your blackness and your pain

Someone wrapped up
In their misery?

To see the rainbow
After the rain

Maybe someone who will not look
And read this page in your open book?
I know you’re here, and in the end
I love you, my dearest friend.
But my friendship isn’t a thing to seek
I am too strange, too afraid, too weak!
I see the tears that rim your eye
When I say I want to die
But your life, you’ll come to see
Will be much better without me!

So you say, time and again
But in the end, you’re my best friend
Give me that blade
Give up your pain!
The bond we’ve made
Outshines the rain
Leave your blackness
Step out of the night
Let my friendship
Be your guiding light

Take this blade
Cast it aside
Into river deep and wide
We love each other
Friend to friend
And that is all I need in the end
©2007-2009 ~guardian777
:iconguardian777:

Author's Comments

In two parts
As you can see
The second's a friend
The first is me
Because of this person
I have come far
And they know exactly
Who they are

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:iconalaskavampiress:
Wow This Is A Very Good Poem..*pats head* I Love How The Rhyme Is Different In Parts Yet The Rhythm Is The Same. Tis Awesomes

--
No sent smells as sweet then that of a rose....
:icontumaini:
i've been here.
many a time,
with many a friend.
I was the second person in each case...

I can feel the emotion here, it's very good.
it strikes a chord.
I try to do the same with my work, but i don't know if i'm as successful as you are.

I really like it, keep it up
:)

--
Peace, love and light
Tumaini,
Jacks
:iconguardian777:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it! I have found that a lot of people tend to feel the emotions I pass through the pen....
:icongarethdekock:
this is amazing, if im not mistaken, the first rhymed poem i've come across on da, and a bril one at that, i think i'll be a watcher just from this one... will check out the rest of your gallery asap! my fav lines:

You choose to be blind!
You don’t want to see…

actually there's tons, brilliant poem

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